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and is a danger to the world and its future. Assignment 2 In his online comment Sure How we broke the world", published on the website in June 2020, Thomas L. Friedmon makes use of various stylistic devices and consciously structures the text in order to support his criticism *2 (p-12) on globalization and human behavior. In the introduction, Friedmon first explains how humans have made the world has "fragile" (1.3) and thereby decreased the chances Successf-117 of overcoming challenging times. The author makes to raise the readers' awareners and wants them to take his criticism personally, as he continuously uses. personal pronour "we" www.msn.com - headline? /title> Beley (wo beginnt 4 wo endet die "Introduction"?) Moreover, he mentions the term "[atural] buffers" (1.5, 15) which is repeated several times throughout т (14,5,7 9 12 14 15 16) in order to include eveney Text Stellen reicher aus, wenn mehr als Belegtechnik (1-2 Beispiele für jeine Zeile angegeben wirdll. stati & the reader? effect on + A R Belegt. (bei einer Schreibweise cf. oder cp.) bleiben R the comment. In order to explain the development of globalization and the abundance of negative events in recent years as a result of said development, Friedman includes multiple enumerations in his introductory passage (cp 11. 10, 12). When further describing the reaction to global crisis, the author makes use of parallel sentence structure by repeating the words "in each case "(11.16 f.), in order to stress the repitition of mistakes. Furthermore, an antithesis line 8, including the contrast of "friction" and "grease", expanding can be found in on his concept of natural buffers. The first depics Seite 3 detailed is. Al Qaeda's terror on the twin towers in 2001 (cf. 1.30). from using negatively connoted adjectives such as austere and violent" (1.25) to describe the development of religious freedom and pluralisme one especially notices the author's use of metaphorical larquage Friedman illustrates organizations by Lattack Aside more example which Friedman the charade of terrorist referring to them as "political palhagens" (11.19 f.), stating that "the virus of Al Qaeda muducted (1,34) and explaining how subtle changes. group into in its genome" (1.35) transformed the 1515 (cf. 11.35 6.). Throughout the whole text, the lauther often depicts veriors crisis as dweaves and mulros mury references to biology. The fact 4 of Seite that this specific metaphor is present throughout large portions of a comment written in the summer of 2020, lets one assume that the references. consciously made to allude to the COVID-19 pandemic. The connection to current event potentially makes the issue nere relatable for the reades In his section 9/11, the author stresses the importance of diversity (cf.11.26 (.) and equates it with power and strength, underlining his statement with notaphorical language, as he mentions the benefits of diverse ecosystems (cf.11.286.). Next, Thomas L. Friedman describes the spread of the effects of globalization COUID-19. As in multiple other sections of his comment, he criticizes that warning signs were being ignored that could have prevented deterioration of the situation (of 11.38-40). Friedman depicts how the world had been perfectly set out for the outbreak of a pandemie by mentioning overpopulation (cf. 11.46. (.), population density (cf.1.42) and "the vastly expanded global network of planes trains and ships (145), He stresses the fact that people are responsible for this behavior with the repetition "pushing and pushing (142), illustrating the repetitive, continuously damaging actions of humans What is ~Following the subject of the pandemic the issue of climate change. The fact that Lance effect SA stylistic devices not named the Friedmon believes this to potentially be worst global disaster (cf. | S1), leta one Lessume that he intentionally decided to mentica excemple at the end of bu the most severe Seite S one Datum: 3.3 05 text, as it may be even The anthor starts of by mentioning that has to be in total denial" (1.50) not to see the previous disasters as "one giant flashing warning sign " (150) for the development can suspect that of the world's climate. One the author a puss bly makes this statement as allusion to Donald Trump's denial of climate change, whom he later mentions in the online cases Aside from the superlative "worst" (1.51). triedmen also includes various comparative forms. Sud es "wette", "hotter" and "drie" (11.52.5.). connection to the fact that the to draw. situation is getting more and more "extreme' (1.52) Furthermore, the auther accentuates that he fads the response to climate change to be utterly disgraceful by enumerating vecies action which should be taken to improve the stualise (cf. 11. 57-60) He 9x6 again makes use of metaphorical tanguage when describing the knowledge which the world has about congle change as "antibodies (156) Friedma & the expords his disapproval of human behavior with the use et Konzept und Layout Europaschule Tudorf Gedruckt auf 100% Recycling Paper 6 By repeating the words "we decided", he makes it clear that people are to blame for their am behavior. Moreover, he also holds businesses accountable, as he mentions Facebook's lack of action against Donald Trump's 'incendiary | posts" (1.65). Seite At the end of his comment, Friedman stresses the relevance of everyone's behavior especially in a world where everyone is connected (cf. 1.66). The author choses to indirectly appeal to the reader with the "Golden Rule" (1.67) ol ["do[ing] unto others wish them to do unto you" (1.68). With this closing statement, Friedman aims at LOC at presenting a general solution to the that he discussed, which everyone should G-S issues live by To draw conclusion, one can death state that the use of stylistic devices, especially metaphorial language, and a systematic structure characterizes Thomas L. Friedman's piece globalization and leads to the comment being quite convincinge & | stylistic device? 구 G کی ک ballusion to the sible/ maxime found in most religions. 1 A - A (keine persönlichen Formulierungen mitt l " Assignment 3. Globalization might be one one of the most important topics in our current time, It characterizes almost all developments which take place in our society and on the whole planet. When discussing globalization, one has to take account both the chances and the challenges into that along with it. In the following, I will comment on of whether "we broke the would " through globalization in connection to Thomas L. Friedman's various other examples comment as well In said comment, the author argues that conflicts and disasters of the last few Love been made online come CS Seite 7 worse the question decades I would somewhat turned into dangerous interdependency In my opinion, it is also true that we have failed R (truely) Wortwah. (s. AV 7) to acknowledge warning signs of truly take Ladvantage of the connections in order to create coordinated bo globalization with him that connection has responses to global disaster. 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Although big chance for young people in less privileged countries, the issue of not having enough affordable, well-developed local education is not shanged. Furthermore, less emplosis is sometimes. on individual cultures and diversity this is a /put Despite these negative aspects of also has to acknowledge Successes and evidence for the fact is not entirely "broken".. The global network of communication, which Thomas L. Friedman also mentions in his comment dres Sometimes manage ta improve always welcome or often lead to the globalization, one the global that the world not G +lah. + Inh. guter Übergang zu den pos. Aspekten + Structuur (s. KT 3) + Inh. thah. fe people's situations. Shared knowledge and research leads to fast progress and free access to the internet creates sources of linformation which the fast majority of the world's citizens that can benefit from. I believe chance to learn. lot from interacting with people from other. cultures. It makes us. more empathetic to individual issues perspective of the world. Furthermore, non-government organizations, such as Amnesty International and Greenpeace continue to introduce positive all have the awareness necess manage Seite and broadens. change and raise for various issues. Especially the younger generation is aware of humanitarian and ecological problems that need to be dealt with. 9 Datum: 23.09.20 more to from my point of view, globalization is a huge chance to actually create a field if give developing nations the essary time and assistance to also develop on their own. In order to support positive development, we need to find new ways of working together while always respecting individuality and diversity. I believe that it is time to really adress urgent issues and to reflect on Our mistakes so that 6 level playing prevent further destruction of Konzept und Layout: Europaschuie Troisdorf Gedruckt auf 100% Recycling-Papier Lous 10 Seite general, I do not believe that. our world is entirely broken, merely severely damaged in many different area If we all work together and take advantage mory opportunities of globalization. can start long-tem positive development which each and every human being is able He benefit from [1 seciety and planet Earth. Part B: Mediation Hi everyone, today I'm going to talk about globalization Lead its benefits and disadvantages for the world, while also focussing on what effects. the growing network of trade and communication. home-country of Germany. has had Some In order to be able to compare the effects the German of globalization on economy to that of developing countries, I did research. I got lot of very interesting information from an article of the "Bertelsmann- Stiftung", which is of experts from greup Germany who deal with social and economic issues. I found at that, while for people like you and me who W (out) are from developed industrial nations, globalization Lis Case This Seite beneficial, this is definitely not the everywhere in the world. might be hard to believe when merelz domestic produc taking into consideration the gross which has enlarged in all nations. However, when closer look, one will notice that taking the growth of the GOP has in no way been exponential. For example, in nations like Germany. Great Britain the GDP can annually increase by about 1,500 € while that of nations such as *^ (p.^2) Mexico of Ching conly grew by 100€. So instead of creating betto opportunities worldwide, globalization only enlarges the economic gup between certain nations and therefore does not support equality. CA ^^ Although exports believe that this will change in the long-run and the gap will eventually subside mery also stress the importance of or vilegeden industrial nations focussing less on themselves on creating a global level playing field and supporting developing countries by, for instance, increasing import from said nations to improve their economy All in all, while our countries continue to become more and forget about all the nearly as much and sceating more fait conditions for everyone Verabschiedung? to more prospero Awe countries who don't benefit emphasize cannot *2 12 Seite In Germany, globalization is largely responsible for an economic boom and cessively increased the per capita income in recent years. we broke the The title of the comment "How world" acts as preview for the rest of text and shows the reader what to expect. In a way, it summarizes the author's negative ophion, as he uses the drastic, negatively connoted word "bruke". JL R (connotated) LK Englisch Q2/1. Hbj. (JL) 1. Klausur [225 Min. = 3 Std. 45 Min.] 23.09.2020 Theme: Chancen und Risiken der Globalisierung - Studying and working in a globalized world Text PART A: Thomas L. Friedman: How we broke the world (online comment) Text PART B: Ergebnisse einer Bertelsmann Studie: Globalisierung nützt vor allem reichen Staaten (online newspaper article) Assignments: 1. Outline Friedman's views on globalization. (AFB I - Comprehension) 2. Examine the author's line of argument and use of stylistic devices. (AFB II- Analysis) 3. Comment on the question whether "we broke the world through globalization. Take the text at hand as a starting point and refer to the knowledge you have acquired in class. (AFB III-Comment) Annotations: 1.5 1.5 1.6 1.8 1.17 1.20 buffer (n.) redundancy (n.) resilience (n.) friction (n.) to install more grease (v.) coronary (n.) pathogen (n.) - sth. or so. that helps protect from harm a situation in which sth. is unnecessary because - it is more than is needed - being able to return quickly to a previous good condition after problems - disagreement - to make something happen more easily - heart attack - any small organism, such as a virus or a bacterium that can cause disease 1.25 austere fundamentalism 1.29 susceptible (adj.) 1.36 ISIS 1.55 to endow sb. with sth. (v.) - jdn. mit etw. ausstatten - very severe fundamentalism - easily influenced or harmed by something - Islamic State Please, deal with the assignments in the given order and try to find appropriate introductions and endings to each answer. Always support your findings with reference and/or quotations from the text and quote properly, giving line references. Seite 1 von 6 5 anaphora (paragrapas) 10 15 20 LK Englisch Q2/1. Hbj. (JL) 25 PART A How we broke the world By Thomas L. Friedman 1. Klausur [225 Min.] 23.09.2020 IF RECENT WEEKS have shown us anything, it's that the world is [...] fragile. 20 And we're the ones who made it that way with our own hands. [...] Over the past years, we've been steadily removing man-made and natural buffers, redundancies, regulations and norms that provide resilience and protection when big systems [...] get stressed. [...] übertr SEPT. 11, 2001 6/2/2020 And, all the while, we've taken the world technologically from connected to interconnected contrast to interdependent - by removing more friction and installing more grease in global markets, dependenc telecommunications systems, the internet, and travel. In doing so, we've made globalization faster, deeper, cheaper, and tighter than ever before. [...] metaphor enumeration [T]his trend of more frequent destabilizing crises has been building over the past 20 years: 9/11, the Great Recession of 2008, COVID-19, and climate change. [...] [W]e will suffer eneration increasing consequences unless we start [...] treating Mother Earth differently. L> abundance of events Note the pattern: Before each crisis I mentioned, we first experienced what could be called a "mild" heart attack, alerting us that we had gone to extremes and stripped away buffers that had protected us from catastrophic failure. In each case, though, we did not take that warning seriously enough- and in each case the result was a full global coronary. [...] heart attache, - That was the year [...] [when for various reasons there was suddenly] [...] a competition diversity = strength punect pe between Shiite Iran and Sunni Saudi Arabia over who was the real leader of the Muslim world. Let's start with 9/11. You could view Al Qaeda and its leader, Osama bin Laden, as political fected the e quitus pathogens that emerged out of the Middle East after 1979. [...] In doing so, [both sides] together weakened any emerging trends toward religious and political pluralism and strengthened austere [and violent] fundamentalism [...]. metaphor warnings parallel sentence structure Seite 2 von 6 negatively cannoted adjectives dast 30 35 40 45 50 example wors!! not seet Remember: The Muslim world was probably at its most influential [...] in the Middle Ages, appeal when it was a rich and diverse polyculture in Moorish Spain. allusion to pust diversity global Diverse ecosystems, in nature and in politics, are always more resilient than monocultures. Monocultures in agriculture are enormously susceptible to disease [...]. [A]s in biology, so, too, in geopolitics the virus of Al Qaeda mutated [...]. As a result, violent Islamic extremism became even more virulent, thanks to subtle changes in its genome that transformed it into ISIS. [...] What happened next we all know: The direct hits on both twin towers on Sept. 11, 2001, which set off a global economic and geopolitical crisis that ended with the United States spending several trillion dollars trying to immunize America against violent Islamic vis extremism. [...] COVID-19 I don't think that I need to spend much time on the COVID-19 pandemic, except to say that the warning sign was also there. It appeared in late 2002 in the Guangdong province of southern China. [...] The coronavirus that caused SARS was hosted by bats and palm civets. It jumped to humans because we had been pushing and pushing high-density urban population centers more deeply into wilderness areas, destroying that natural buffer and replacing it with monoculture crops and concrete. [...] CLIMATE CATASTROPHE togethenes Superierity connection to biology You have to be in total denial not to see all of this as one giant flashing warning signal for our looming- and potentially worst global disaster, climate change. Seite 3 von 6 etape The vastly expanded global network of planes, trains, and ships, combined with far too few buffers of global cooperation and governance, combined with the fact that there are almost eight billion people on the planet today (compared with 1.8 billion [in] 1918 [...]), enabled averpopulatio this coronavirus to spread globally in the blink of an eye. our fault repetition La continuous! denial of ce biggest disaster [...] [I]ntensity and cost of extreme weather events all increase. The wets get wetter, the hots comparative forms get hotter, the dry periods get drier [...]. 55 60 65 The wise thing would be for us to get busy preserving all of the ecological buffers that nature endowed us with [...]. - lenowledge [...] [U]nlike the COVID-19 pandemic, we have all the antibodies we need to both live with metaphor and limit climate change. [...] That means reducing CO₂ emissions, protecting forests that store carbon and [...] protecting mangroves that buffer storm surges and, more generally, coordinating global governmental responses that set goals and limits and monitor performance. [.. We decided to remove buffers in the name of efficiency; we decided to let capitalism run wild d and shrink our government's capacities when we needed them most; we decided not to copoal.c. anaphora cooperate with one another in a pandemic; we decided to deforest the Amazon; we decided es all the people to invade pristine ecosystems and hunt their wildlife. Facebook decided not to restrict any of Facebook President Trump's incendiary posts; Twitter did. [...] As the world gets more deeply intertwined, everyone's behavior [...] matters more than ever. And, therefore, so does the "Golden Rule. [...] Do unto others as you wish them to do unto you, because more people in more places in more ways on more days can now do unto you and you unto them like never before. https://www.msn.com/en-ph/money/topstories/how-we-broke-the-world/ar-BB14UBOB 825 words enuention Seite 4 von 6 indirect appeal 5 10 15 20 LK Englisch Q2/1. Hbj. (JL) PART B 1. Klausur [225 Min.] 23.09.2020 Mediation You are an exchange student at a British school. In an Economics class, the teacher asks you to prepare a short speech on the pros and cons of globalization from a German's point of view. You have just read the article below. Write the part of your speech in which you summarize the information about the effects of globalization on Germany's economy. Where necessary, add information which may help to avoid possible misunderstandings. Globalisierung nützt vor allem reichen Staaten Veröffentlicht am 24.03.2014 Industrienationen sind laut Bertelsmann-Stiftung die Gewinner der Globalisierung. Sie wachsen so schnell, dass sich der Abstand zu den Schwellenländern noch vergrößert. Diese bleiben auf der Strecke. Zu den größten Gewinnern der Globalisierung gehören Deutschland und andere Industriestaaten. Rein Rechnerisch nütze die Globalisierung allen Ländern, überall wachse das Pro-Kopf-Einkommen, heißt es in einer Prognos-Studie im Auftrag der Bertelsmann Stiftung. Allerdings wachsen die Industrienationen so schnell, dass sich der Abstand zu den Schwellen- und Entwicklungsländern noch vergrößert. ,,Wir müssen erkennen, dass die Globalisierung die Schere zwischen Arm und Reich eher noch weiter öffnet", sagte Stiftungsvorstand Aart De Geus. ,,Erst über einen längeren Zeitraum wird sie dazu beitragen, dass Schwellen- und Entwicklungsländer die Wohlstandslücke zu den Industrienationen verkleinern können." 42 Länder [wurden] genauer untersucht. Demnach hat sich die Wohlstandslücke in den letzten zwei Jahrzehnten nicht verkleinert, im Gegenteil: Während durch Globalisierungseffekte das Bruttoinlandsprodukt pro Kopf in den Industrienationen um bis zu 1500 Euro jährlich stieg, wuchs es in Ländern wie Mexiko, China oder Indien um weniger als 100 Euro je Einwohner." Seite 5 von 6 the long 25 30 35 Finnland profitiert am stärksten Selbst der Abstand zwischen Deutschland und dem wegen seiner Wachstumsraten oft beneideten China hat sich vergrößert. Betrug der Abstand zwischen dem realen Bruttoinlandsprodukt pro Kopf 1990 der Studie zufolge 20.879 Euro, so waren es 2011 sogar 25.630 Euro. Deutschland hat nach Finnland, Dänemark und Japan am stärksten von der Globalisierung profitiert. So ließ die Globalisierung zwischen 1990 und 2011 das reale deutsche Bruttoinlandsprodukt (BIP) im Durchschnitt jedes Jahr um rund 100 Milliarden Euro wachsen", haben die Autoren der Studie berechnet. Die Verflechtung auf politischer, wirtschaftlicher und sozialer Ebene sei somit für 20 Prozent des Wachstums der deutschen Volkswirtschaft verantwortlich gewesen, hieß es. Der durchschnittliche jährliche Einkommensgewinn pro Kopf betrug in Deutschland demnach 1240 Euro. Am geringsten waren die absoluten Zuwächse der Pro-Kopf-Einkommen in den großen Schwellenländern Brasilien und Russland (je 120 Euro), Mexiko (100 Euro), China (80) und Indien (20). experts Der Stiftungsvorsitzende de Geus forderte die Industriestaaten auf, ihre Entwicklungspolitik zu verstärken und ihre Märkte für Produkte aus weniger entwickelten Ländern zu öffnen. From www.welt.de, 24 March 2014 417 words Annotations Bertelsmann-Stiftung -group of experts who provide advice on social or economic issues; created in 1977; largest private non- profit foundation in Germany Bruttoinlandsprodukt (BIP) - gross domestic product (GDP) Seite 6 von 6 globalizatio ge responsible Lk Englisch Q2/1. Hbj. Thomas L. Friedman. How we broke the world Erwartungshorizont / Bewertungsbogen PART A (70%) Schreiben mit Leseverstehen (integriert)] 1. Inhaltliche Leistung 1 1 2 3 4 5 7 2 1. Klausur 2 6 Summary of Friedman's main message/appeal to the reader. Summe 1. Teilaufgabe additional points: politicians of the 3 Anforderungsbereich I (Comprehension) Outline Friedman's views on globalization. introduction (author/title/ text type / publication) 5 Name: Topic/author's message: negative effects of globalization are caused by us humans by having no respect for our nature/by removing protective measures and harming our nature We have continuously loosened laws, abolished regulations, not prioritizing rules and standards/ not taking them seriously, with the result that nature has had to step back in favour of overriding goals of multinational corporations. The author mentions crisis situations which the world went through: 9/11, the Great Recession of 2009, COVID-19, and climate change If we do not start taking care of our world, we will face more and more bad consequences in the future. Anforderungsbereich II (Analysis) Examine the author's line of argument and use of stylistic devices. 1 introductory / topical sentence (with reference to the assignment) headline: provocative, shocking 1 part: Introduction to the topic (II. 3-17) subheading/first sentence: thesis which will be proven by examples, phrase in capital letters in "IF RECENT WEEKS" refers to the time/period of the corona virus as a very important topic which currently concerns the whole world 1 paragraph (1.4-6): introduction to the article and its topic, evidences for his thesis mentioned above, causes uncomfortable feeling on the part of the reader/causes sense of shame, the reader believes the author that his statements are true (increasing credibility of the author) language: personal pronoun "We", object pronouns "us", choice of words, imagery, enumerations,...] 2nd paragraph (11.7-10): listing things our society/multinational companies/our governments have pushed forward with good intentions, they wanted to boost our economy more and more [language: personal pronoun "we", climax, enumeration, choice of words, repetition,... antithesis/contrast. 3d paragraph (il. 11-13): bad consequences caused by our behavior, which we did not expect, warning by the author [language: personal pronoun "we", enumeration, ...] 4th paragraph (II. 14-17): pattern: 1. First warning signs, 2. Ignoring the warning signals, 3. Drastic consequences 23-9-2019 (JL) Every crisis announces itself in advance, but we humans often do not take these warnings seriously until it is too late. fail to take advantage showed knowledge Contatos max. Plate 2 N. 2 1 2 2 1 2 Pkte max. Pkte 1 2 4 1 1 (2) 108 1 0 Pkte 3 6 7 9 10 12 13 15 16 17 9th paragraph (II. 28-29): diverse ecosystems vs. monocultures, "disease" [language: comparison to agriculture, allusion to current corona virus] 10th paragraph (II. 30-33): example of drastic consequence 9/11, "immunize" 11 [language: personal pronoun "we", rhetorical question, enumeration, choice of words, allusion to the current corona virus] 11th paragraph (II. 34-36): comparison of Al Qaeda to a virus mutating to ISIS [language: comparison to biology, allusion to the corona virus] 3rd part: second example of a consequence COVID-19 (11.37-48) 12th paragraph (II. 37-40): reference to the already mentioned repetitive pattern (first the warning sign), Friedman assumes that the reader already has some basic knowledge about the virus, as it is a current topic [language: personal pronoun "1"] 13th paragraph (ll. 41-44): illustration of reasons for the pandemic, the outbreak 3 14 was our fault, causes feelings of guilt 12 18 19 20 21 22 [language: imagery, climax, allusion to current corona virus] 2nd part: first example of a consequence 9/11 (11.18-36) 5th paragraph (II. 18-20): example of 9/11, well known event, evokes bad feelings such as anxiety, "pathogens" [language: choice of words, connotations, contrast, allusion to current corona virus] INDECORATION 6th paragraph (II. 21-23): reasons for the conflict 8 9 [language: choice of words] 7th paragraph (II. 24-25): listing consequences such as no peaceful coexistence of different beliefs and politics L 1 [language: enumeration, choice of words] Imagery. 8th paragraph (ll. 26-27): evidence that it is possible to live side by side together having different cultural and religious backgrounds [language: allusion to history of Moorish Spain] equates/compares [language: personal pronoun "we"] 14th paragraph (II. 45-48): further reasons and enumeration of disadvantages of globalization, "in the blink of an eye" [language: enumeration, use of facts and figures, imagery] most seve 4th part: third example of a consequence climate catastrophe (11.49-50) 15th paragraph (II. 49-51): warning signals can hardly be ignored, the consequences of climate change are already being felt [language: choice of words, imagery, insertions o 16th paragraph (II. 52-53): illustration of climate change (language: imagery, climax, parallelism] 17th paragraph (II. 54-55): suggested solution, urgent appeal to the reader [language: object pronoun "us"] 18th paragraph (II. 56-60): further possible solutions [language: personal pronoun "we", enumeration, alliterations my 5th part: conclusion/appeal to the reader/claim (11.61-69) 19th paragraph (ll. 61-65): our mistakes (language: repetition of "we decided" = anaphora, enumeration, allusion to Trump, facebook and twitter] 20th paragraph (11. 66-67): reference to the golden rule [language: allusion to the golden rule also found in the bible! concluding / summarising sentence.... additional points: Summe 2. Teilaufgabe 21 paragraph (ll. 68-69): the golden Tule is mentioned and extended by the challenges in the current time of a global world [language: allusion to the golden rule, enumeration, anaphora/repetition of "more"] 4 parallel sent. str. (ll. 161 Weclition (142) 3 3 3 22 I 4 18 133 Anforderungsbereich III (Evaluation / Comment) Comment on the question whether we broke the world through globalization Take the text at hand as a starting point and refer to the knowledge you have acquired in class. 1 The student provides an appropriate introduction to the comment... She/he advances arguments for and/or against the thesis that "we broke the world with reference to the article at hand and to the knowledge acquired in class. Yes, we broke the world (disadvantages of globalization): We have reduced natural buffers, we set ourselves above laws, we no longer take the protection of our nature seriously enough just because of greater economic profits Countries depend on each other (if one country suffers, others suffer too) 2 0 e Globalization is often seen as synonymous with westernization. Western culture, propagated by the media, serves as an example for many developing countries, but also endangers the cultural diversity of nation's languages, traditions, ways of life, values and beliefs. Western influence is not limited to culture. Developed countries are tempted to use their economic and political power to intervene in other countries affairs. Such interventions are not always welcome or beneficial and can cause a divide or even a war. We suffer from the increasing consequences such as economic crisis, climate catastrophes, terrorism, pandemics. As a result of global consumption, travel and transport, limited resources are disappearing, 0 0 The disposal of mountains of often toxic waste is often left to third world workers (not in my backyard attitude). The availability of fresh water is becoming scarce. Coca-cola Side effects of increased migration are illegal immigration, people- smuggling and the frequently bad treatment of immigrant minorities. No, we did not break the world (advantages of globalization): The world has developed tremendously from connected to interconnected to interdependent We've made globalization faster, deeper, cheaper, and tighter than ever before We can travel freely, learn about other cultures, increases cultural awareness Exchange between academics, experts or politically interested people all over the world makes research, protests and activism more effective, fostering global civil society Migrants can move to different countries to find work and support their families 0 D ● @ 。 The rapid economic growth of large emerging markets like China, India or Brazil, who are adopting the West's unsustainable lifestyle and consumerism, make the situation worse. D NGOS can share knowledge and know-how and bring help to where it is needed e Conflicts between countries can be handled diplomatically and with a better understanding of the situation because more information is available via the internet/international press L 3 The student writes a conclusion summarizing her/his opinion 4 additional points developing countries / locals forced to Summe 3. Telloufgabe (3.2) max. Pkte 2 Pkte Low wast warlin-leb19 Summe: 2.,2. und 3. Teilaufgabe (PART A) 2 9 3 3 2 (2) 14 eigentl. sogar PART A (continued) II. Darstellungsleistung/ sprachliche Leistung - Konkretisierung der Bewertungskriterien Der Prüfling- 1. Kommunikative Textgestaltung 1 Aufgabenbezug richtet seinen Text konsequent und explizit auf die Aufgabenstellung aus. 2 Textformate .... beachtet die Textsortenmerkmale / Konventionen der jeweils geforderten Zieltextformate. 3 Textaufbau ... erstellt einen sachgerecht strukturierten / leserfreundlichen Text, u.a. durch sprachliche Verknüpfungen und Absätze als erkennbare Sinnabschnitte. 4 Ökonomie ... gestaltet seinen Text hinreichend ausführlich, aber ohne unnötige Wiederholungen und Umständlichkeiten. 5 Belegtechnik belegt seine Aussagen durch eine funktionale Verwendung von Verweisen und Zitaten. Summe 1 (1-5) 2. Ausdrucksvermögen / Sprachliche Mittel 6 Eigenständigkeit löst sich vom Wortlaut des Ausgangstextes und formuliert eigenständig. 7 Allgemeiner und thematischer Wortschatz ... bedient sich eines sachlich wie stilistisch angemessenen und differenzierten allgemeinen und thematischen Wortschatzes. Der Prüfling .... 8 Textbesprechungs- und Textproduktionswortschatz ... bedient sich eines sachlich wie stilistisch angemessenen und differenzierten Textbesprechungs- und Textproduktionswortschatzes. 9 Satzbau ... bedient sich eines variablen und dem jeweiligen Zieltextformat angemessenen Satzbaus. Summe 2 (6-9) 3. Sprachrichtigkeit / Normen der sprachlichen Korrektheit 10 Wortschatz 11 Grammatik 12 Orthographie (i.e. Rechtschreibung und Zeichensetzung) Summe 3 (10-12) max. Pite 1616 43 Plate 3 2 21 19 max. Pkte 616 414 max Pkte Plite 7 7- 21 241 9 8 4 21 Phte + 3 Summe: Darstellungs- & sprachliche Leistung (PART A) 63 53 Summe: Inhaltliche (1) und sprachliche Leistung (PART A) 10598 PART &- Sprachmittlung (30%) Schreiben mit Leseverstehen (integriert)] Inhaltliche Leistung 1 beginnt mit einer adäquaten Begrüßung der Zuhörer. erzeugt im Einleitungssatz Spannung, indem er/sie z.B. eine rhetorische Frage stellt oder eine provokante Aussage tätig gibt die Vor- und Nachteile der Globalisierung aus Sicht von Deutschland an und gibt wichtige Details im Sinne der Aufgabenstellung sinngemäß zusammenfassend wieder und fügt ggf. für das Verstehen erforderliche Erklärungen hinzu: Vorteile: • Industrial nations like Germany profit most from globalization. AVE • In the long term, the gap between industrialized countries and emerging markets will be able to narrow. In industrialized countries, per capita GDP grew by up to 1500 euros per year. # After Finland, Denmark and Japan, Germany has benefited most from 2 4 S 6 W the part of your speech in which you summarize the formation about the effects of globalization on Germany's economy Where necessary, add information which may help to avoid possible misunderstandings Die Schülerin / der Schüler. 3 1 2 + + globalization. Globalization has been responsible for 20 percent of the growth of the German economy. 0 The average annual income gain per capita in Germany was 1240 euros. Nachteile: $ Although per capita income is growing in all countries as a result of globalization, the gap between the economies of the industrialized nations is widening faster than in the emerging markets, so the gap between the industrialized nations and the emerging markets is widening. The gap between rich and poor is wideping all the time. In emerging countries such as Mexico, China or India, per capita GDP rose by less than 200 euros per year. The gap between Germany and China has also widened. The absolute growth in per capita income was lowest in the large emerging markets Brazil and Russia, Mexico, China and India. * 6 gibt den Appell der Bertelsmann-Stiftung an die Zuhörer weiter. The Bertelsmann-Stiftung is calling on industrialized nations to support the economies of emerging markets by opening their markets to products from less developed countries. L bedankt sich für die Aufmerksamkeit der Zuschauer und verabschiedet sich von ihnen in angemessener Weise. ertulit ein weiteres aufgabenbezogenes Kriterium: B. Bewertungskriterien Darstellung / Sprache 1 Kommunikative Textgestaltung Der Prüfling richtet seinen Text konsequent und explizit auf die Intention und den Adressaten im Sinne der Aufgabenstellung aus berücksichtigt den situativen Kontext max Pkte Pkte 2 1 11 9 2 10 (2) | 0 Summe der inhaltlichen Leistung (PART B) 18 13 22 max Pkte 2 Pkte 212 3 ... beachtet die Textsortenmerkmale des geforderten Zieltextformats. ... erstellt einen sachgerecht strukturierten Text, u.a. durch sprachliche Verknüpfungen, Absätze als erkennbare Sinnabschnitte etc. 5 ... gestaltet/formuliert ihren/seinen Text hinreichend ausführlich, aber ohne unnötige Wiederholungen und Umständlichkeiten. 2. Ausdrucksvermögen / Verfügbarkeit sprachlicher Mittel Der Prüfling 6 ... löst sich vom Wortlaut des Ausgangstextes und formuliert eigenständig, ggf. unter Verwendung von Kompensationsstrategien. verwendet funktional einen sachlich wie stilistisch angemessenen und differenzierten allgemeinen und thematischen Wortschatz. 8 ... verwendet funktional einen sachlich wie stilistisch angemessenen und differenzierten Funktionswortschatz. 7 ... verwendet einen variablen und dem jeweiligen Zieltextformat angemessenen Satzbau. 9 3. Sprachrichtigkeit Der Prüfling beachtet die Normen der sprachlichen Korrektheit Wortschatz Grammatik Orthographie (i.e. Rechtschreibung und Zeichensetzung) 10 11 12 Pkte Summe 1 (1-5) Gesamtnote: Summe 3 (10-12) Summe: Darstellungs- & sprachliche Leistung (PART B) Summe: Inhaltliche (1) und sprachliche Leistung (1) (PART B) 1- 2+ 3- 89 - 83 4 82- 74- 75 2 2 2 12 max Phte Summe 2 (6-9) 9 4+ → Bewertungsschlüssel / Zuordnung der Punkte zu den Notenstufen: Note 1+ 1 2 2- 3+ 3 150 142 134-127 119 - 112-104- 97- 143 135/128 120 113 105 98 90 sehr gut 1X Great performance! Hats off! 10.10.20 4. 2 2 2 2 22 3 13 max. Pkte Pkte →Gesamtpunktzahl: PARTA und PART B 150 135 Pkt. 4 4 1 1 9 9 272+ 4 5+ 5 S- 67- 59- 49- 40- 29 60 50 41 30 0